Tuesday 14 December 2010

Phil Lane



Nine Ways of Looking at Dawn


I.
Dawn encroaches like doom
written on the sky,
a contract you never signed,
a painting without
a signature.


II
Dawn unfurls like a white flag,
you surrender to
a morning that looms
with idle hands,
itches for something
to complicate.


III
Dawn comes down
like a death sentence,
it’s there, it waits,
the sun rises
even on the gallows.


IV
Dawn is birds singing
in the squalor,
sun shining
through the spit
and scorn of judges.


V
Dawn is another
new sky
of blood
and plumbing
and minutiae.


VI
Dawn arrives
when you are trying
to be a man,
emasculates you
with its flat, white
sun.


VII
Dawn yields
neither marked gain
nor marked loss,
it breaks even,
it’s a wash.


VIII
Dawn forgets like rain:
as rain forgets the drought,
so dawn forgets the night.


IX
After the gloaming,
dawn is all there is

2 comments:

Jenny said...

Powerful poem, Phil. Beautifully crafted. The theme made me think of Camus' L’Étranger.

Thanks for sharing this. Welcome back to the salon anytime.

Peter Greene said...

What Jenny said (except I've only ever read a bit of The Stranger). I really liked this piece, Phil; particularly the couplet 'written on the sky,
a contract you never signed,', and the birds singing in the squalor. Kind of bang on, in an excellent and very real way. Really a very enjoyable read, and, as Jenny said, powerful. Thanks for it!

PG